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....creative title I know. :| I apologize.

Butttt I did most of this last weekend and just touched it up today. This was my excuse to practice wolves and do a semi background. The grass and random thrown in clouds is pretty fucked up but whatever. I CANNOT WOLF.

THISSS is an art trade for =Kiwi513 and her wolf character Korsbar. I hope you don't mind the boring, not dynamic picture but you can have a bright sunset. This pose took me a hell of a long time to sketch, I kid you not. I actually find the anatomy of a wolf not that bad but getting everything in proportion is what kills me. And I'm semi sastified with the result so. AND YEAH. I CANNOT. DRAW. MUZZLES. I tried seriously, I apologize for the lack of face.

oh well 8D I really hope you guys enjoy, it's nice uploading here for once! AND NOW I WILL GTFO OFF THE INTERNET TO STUDY FOR EXAMS.

ps: crits would be wonderful!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Okay first of all, I want to say that you used colors pretty nicely here! It has such a nice warm feel to it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>

I'm not too sure of how wolf anatomy works, but from what I can see here you did a great job on the wolf overall. The only things that seem a little off are the chest area - it's drawn beautifully but it looks as though it doesn't connect with the stomach. You know what I mean? It's kind of like it sharply slopes upward behind the leg.

But again, you've done a beautiful job on this and I can see that you've improved quite a bit!

The hills are a nice touch, gives the picture a bit of depth too. The one thing I think you could work on is the grass, although it seems like you didn't spend too much time on it. You could try making your own grass brush if you use Photoshop.

The only thing about the grass in this is it looks like it's going all sorts of different directions and it's only shown/drawn at the top of the hills and leaves the rest of the hills bare. Go right for it and dive in with details! It'll be worth it to spend the extra time on the picture!